hmbk
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Post by hmbk on Nov 17, 2009 19:32:49 GMT -5
Well, we should get to work on rewriting the dialogue then. It would help if everyone could find me some resources like the video or sound effects or music and email them to me at minibomb14@sbcglobal.net (but tell me if you do because that's an old email address that I don't check very often).
Receiving the voice over would be the easy part because you could give the file directly to me. I don't have anything that can download off of Youtube though...
As for the script... Hick's voices could probably be kept the same? Girl's first line would probably have to be changed something about discovering this place. "I don't even know what it is, but I'm joinin' it!" Black kid could be talking about having a good time? Take it from there, I guess.
Also, on the voices, try to make them match as best you can, but if not, I have a technique for shortening the pauses between words at the expense of making them seem a little awkward.
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Post by Ludwig Von Koopa on Nov 17, 2009 19:35:25 GMT -5
...Meeting in #sm41twiviahq to decide wot lines we use.
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Post by Ludwig Von Koopa on Nov 17, 2009 20:41:09 GMT -5
Hick: It's just a normal day in Mushroom Kingdom. Girl: Ludwig revives Planet Koopa! Blondie: I don't even know what it is, but I'm joinin' it! Black kid: Which makes him invite everybody! DS girl: *Shoves DS in your face (with screenshot of PK)* Nerd: Into his forum. Hick: Raaaaaaaah! Nerd: Planet Koopa is an amazing forum owned by Fat kid: PrinceofKoopas. Blondie: Wahoo! Black kid: There are tons of cool members already in there. Fat kid: I love Planet Koopa... Blondie: ...Lots of division... Girl: ...Reading fan-fics, completely awesome skin selections, cool discussions... Nerd: Just kicking your butt. Narrator: Planet Koopa. Check the link. Everyone is welcome.
Note: We made sure to sync all the lines with the number of syllables everyone is sayin', takin' a few liberties when the kid is off-screen and the DS footage is on-screen (which will be replaced with select screenshots of PK, and for the skin part, we'll quickly scroll through screens of the good skins, like split-second maybe), with the Bowser banner that you see in Shadow Creature and the other skins that ain't Doopliss/Captain.
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hmbk
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Post by hmbk on Nov 17, 2009 20:47:36 GMT -5
Some of the matches might come out a little awkward (The first girl line) but kids don't have very clear lip flaps when talking anyway.
Anyway, this should be pretty simple, so now I just need to get the resources.
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YoshiRider123
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Post by YoshiRider123 on Nov 17, 2009 20:51:03 GMT -5
I admire the rewritten script.
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Red Ninja Koopa
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Post by Red Ninja Koopa on Nov 17, 2009 22:08:51 GMT -5
Shall we request music to be played in the background? The original uses music that isn't from any game. I put forward this classic:
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YoshiRider123
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Post by YoshiRider123 on Nov 17, 2009 22:11:19 GMT -5
I approve of this awesome choice.
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Post by Ludwig Von Koopa on Nov 17, 2009 22:12:07 GMT -5
Shall we request music to be played in the background? The original uses music that isn't from any game. I put forward this classic: You know the point of background music is to set the tone of the situation. Which means you'll have to be sayin' the script REALLY fast with that kind of tempo.
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hmbk
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Post by hmbk on Nov 17, 2009 22:19:29 GMT -5
It may work anyway. The commercial already has a pretty fast pace.
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Post by Ludwig Von Koopa on Nov 17, 2009 22:22:36 GMT -5
It may work anyway. The commercial already has a pretty fast pace. I tried sayin' it. ...Way too quick.
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Red Ninja Koopa
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Post by Red Ninja Koopa on Nov 17, 2009 22:44:56 GMT -5
This song makes everything sound good.
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Post by Ludwig Von Koopa on Nov 17, 2009 22:49:33 GMT -5
This song makes everything sound good. ...Easier to use version.
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Red Ninja Koopa
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Post by Red Ninja Koopa on Nov 17, 2009 22:59:46 GMT -5
ok but seriously, we need a song that has a very good 30 second segment.
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Post by Ludwig Von Koopa on Nov 17, 2009 23:17:30 GMT -5
ok but seriously, we need a song that has a very good 30 second segment. Hiring Rawk on the job.
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Post by Ludwig Von Koopa on Nov 17, 2009 23:40:54 GMT -5
Rawk suggests this:
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hmbk
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Post by hmbk on Nov 17, 2009 23:50:41 GMT -5
It's usable if you want people in the comments to say "Hey, that's Lucky Star!"
I could just try taking a M&L song that's similar.
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Post by Ludwig Von Koopa on Nov 18, 2009 0:02:17 GMT -5
It's usable if you want people in the comments to say "Hey, that's Lucky Star!" I could just try taking a M&L song that's similar. ...But I don't want that. >.> Gonna get Rawk to try again.
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Post by Ludwig Von Koopa on Nov 18, 2009 0:32:54 GMT -5
This might work.
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hmbk
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Post by hmbk on Nov 18, 2009 0:43:43 GMT -5
That would work perfectly.
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Post by Ludwig Von Koopa on Nov 18, 2009 4:12:45 GMT -5
That would work perfectly. So we would have to dub the lines in a way even cheesier than the actual kids did. Fun.
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